Thursday, 29 October 2015

My tuhituhi mahi


whainga ako: write a description about rain

Rain is a water that drops from ranginui rain is so heavy it can floud everything it feels like tear drops of people's tears of when they are crying it smells like nothing but with a beautiful perfume smell it taste like fresh water mix with heaven. i listened to the drop of the hailstone and they looked like small baby stones but when i put my hand out to have a feel it felt like a knife going through my hand.

1 comment:

  1. kia ora tanea i like your mahi because it makes sentences and its got heaps of colours
    but i like the the way you put desricbing words.